All Comments on 'A Beautiful Blond Divorcee'

BEAUTIFULY written story so erotic wish it was a series !!!!!!!!!!!

great, until the ending, who was having the babies was confusing

Stunning story - one of your best I think.

Thought I had it correct...Catty had the baby. But what is the lump that Sonya had?

Thanks !!!

Just an excellent interacial love story, I enjoyed it, have put you on my favourite author list. 5*'s

i was ambivalent...it seems like a good, but unlikely, premise...however, it was poorly written...run-on sentences...poor punctuation...sometimes i had to read a sentence 3 or 4 times to see who was doing what to whom...suggestion: send your stories out to a volunteer editor to at LEAST correct the grammar/syntax...poor writing is a turn-off to the average reader no matter HOW good the premise of the story is...

The sit was good at the start and it might have become better.

It didn't.

The simplistic characters made pretty much everything seem overly simple.

As I said, it could have been good.

what pure bull shit,what make's you think that this is beautiful if you want to fuck then fuck ,then fuck black but it not beautiful it is just fucking that's all

Yo wanna try ma Spliffs, but get non one fo da crap, mon

Excellent an added twist in an genre. It adds a twist to a tired old genre. At the end the relationship and emotional component started to expand don't know how you could do it but if you could start a little earlier it would ne amazing.

The characters have a little more breath than the average Blackening story very nice change.

Thank you for a wonderful tale

Not bad. Shame about the poor spelling and grammar, plus names getting mixed up!?

Wow!! An exquisite story. I hope to see MANY more of your stories on here. Thank you

Wow excellent story… hope you writers more of this making series..