All Comments on 'A Beautiful Experience'

You certainly know how to drain your readers!!!!

What a great story!

The story was ok but the reading was made difficult by the frequent use of "..." nearly every couple sentences.

Very hot well written story. How about another chapter.

I liked the twist you put in at the beginning, although the rest of the story line was pretty routine.

First rate stroke, though - good pacing and build-up to the obvious conclusion. It is not clear why your narrator let her lover come inside her without a condom - and then why he pulled out before he finished ejaculating

The conclusion didn't conclude anything - but if the story has anything but more screwing we ought to be given a hint -

Wonderful story, moved right along and really kept me up. Please write more, either continue this or a new one, but don't go away.

Aw to find a man like that just once ^^ good story. can't wait for more(if there's anymore)

I love reading erotica written in the first person that deals with at least a little of the thoughts and emotions that go along with the sex.

Thank you.

how i wish i was you right now! it was really good..... a nice read! i really enjoyed it... thanx 4 sharing :)

Mmmmmmmmmm love the build-up to the 'main event'.....very well done ;)

Oh please write more!! I want his monster cock !!!

Fuck! You write so well. Seems like such a simple encounter, but to a 19 yo it must have been sheer bliss. Your cunt must have been ready for a lot more that night?

Please write some more.

I stumbled on this...so glad I did. To think of a woman who can describe sex this way really turned me on. A great read! Well contrived, brilliantly described and beautifully explicit!

as silly as this sounds, I find poor grammar distracting...your story was extremely well told and written!

"As if reading my thoughts, he asked "I want to come inside you.""

He didn't ask anything, he told you.