All Comments on 'A Beautiful Finish to Date Night'

That was incredible. Whilst other stories read like scripts for porn videos, your story is the antidote to that. It is real couple having sex. It is like the section of you porn that is home videos. No faking, no editing. Just a real couple picking off of the response of the other to determine what comes next. Knowing one another well enough to have a rhythm a flow an expectation and a confidence to please and be pleased.

Don't get me wrong the porn like script stories have their place but yours is a breath of fresh air among it. I hope you'll continue to write. Please do.

A beautiful sensuous story.

KEEP WRITING.

Keep your day job, you need it.