All Comments on 'A Bedtime Story: All Tied Up'

by CrzyCatLdy

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JWrenJWrenalmost 10 years ago
Talk to me

Nicely sustained build up but somewhat short on dialogue. Tied up and blindfolded he may be but surely not tongue tied or gagged. And is silence part of her dominance?

CrzyCatLdyCrzyCatLdyalmost 10 years agoAuthor
Thank you for your feedback and comments

JWren, yes silence is part of it. Silence is golden sometimes.

For those of you that have left comments and feedback to both of my stories, thank you so much for the input. These stories have been my first endeavor into this type of writing. I find it has been both challenging and a freeing experience. I continue to write more stories and will continue to submit them as long as you continue to read them. Again, thank you for taking the time to read my bedtime stories.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
OMG

Soooooooo hot! Please, more female domination!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
me

Your story has me wishing I was that lucky guy

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
A little short.

I loved the details of how you drew out his pleasure. You hinted at having known him as a boy, but failed to explain. Perhaps there is a prequel. You also ended abruptly. Perhaps there is a sequel. It was well done as a stroke story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
A minor addition

Needs a gag with a scarf or two.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Standing

Wanna see weak knees....do this to him in an upright position

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