All Comments on 'A Bet to be Paid Off'

Great story, great pacing, fix spelling and tense errors and they would be perfect. Can't wait to read what happens with the real Kelly's appearance.

wonderful story, yeah i was wondering if macy was bi or not. now i know and yummy cant wait to see where it goes from here. again thanks i'm hooked on your tales. kisses

Intriguing story story with a nice twist at the end... and in the middle for that matter. Well done!

I gave 5stars and I made you my favorite author. The Atlantic City story ended but itdid not transition on exit smoothly. I assume you left after breakfast with Kelly/Macy. It was quite impressive winning $22k. Since you were with Kelly does Macy have to know about it??? HAHA!

THANK YOU FOR ANOTHER GREAT READ.

well done!!!

We have loved reading through your adventures, enjoyed your good English and your humour.

It took us back a few years to holidays with similar episodes, which for one reason or another strengthened our love and respect for each other.

Thank you for letting us in !

Love,

Susie & peter

Good read and quite hot.

Too many spelling mistakes and 32 is red on a roulette

Wheel.

Another ridiculous bet story, as bad as any I've read.