All Comments on 'A Big Meeting Ch. 01'

HOT as hell (that's how I voted), but an editor is needed.

"To" vs. "Too" is fairly elementary grammar.

Marvalous, (sp) The descriptions and the order of events makes for a very exciting read.

Very true, could have been an actual experience.

You nailed it, very discriptive, from personal experience?

But I agree with the above comment, I was slightly distracted by the grammar. If you want some help in future you can drop me a line.

An engrossing drama, A Big Meeting has been placed in the First Time category by the authors, although it would be better placed in the Romance category, for it is certainly that, with appealing characters and a fine romantic atmosphere.