All Comments on 'A Birthday Present Ch. 02'

by PhaedraLovesKnives

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
U-TURN

I would've expected a little forced sex , maybe, but this is beyond revenge. Torture and disfigurement weren't really necessary. Why waste a hot body? Why not just turn her into an insatiable nymphomaniac? And by the by, where's the sex in this chapter? Hope Chapter 3 gets better, but I think it's already too late for that.

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