All Comments on 'A Birthday Surprise for Brett!'

by izzyhug

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chesthairslavechesthairslaveover 10 years ago
Please slow down

That was the fastest paced story I've ever read. Your characters were given minimal or no time to think, plan nor even enjoy their experience. Bunny, Brett, Dimitri, and Monique might have been interesting given the chance. I would have liked an opportunity to feel emotion from them.

izzyhugizzyhugover 10 years agoAuthor
Thanks

Thanks for your comment ... I agree it is very fast paced, but the characters are more animalistic rather than lovey dovey ... my other stories featuring Brett and Anya are in the BDSM section ... thanks for reading Izzy xx

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