All Comments on 'A Bit of Beach Fun'

Just another cheater boasting himself....

of infidelity. impo appears to be a new wornknob.

Granted, despite this not being the first time for Bull to screw his Sis-in-law, just going to her beach-blanket and dropping 'trou' would be crass. But why the long build up, written so it looked to be a stranger contact? What would have been a fast but effective seduction became a distraction. Just like the parting grotto trip!

3*

The first story of yours that I’ve read. Either I wasn’t paying close enough attention or you did very well in disguising what was going on. I really enjoyed it for a story that’s very short. And the ending, also very slick. 5 stars and a follow. Thanks