All Comments on 'A Black Afternoon'

one of the most sexiest stories I have ever read! I could actually picture myself in each moment and was a total turn on so THANK YOU!!!!!

Beautifully written and highly erotic. Definitely had the desired effect and look forward to reading more from this *very* talented writer.

well done...very "hard" to write a great short story...you made the two point conversion (for football fans)

Eroticism at its finest! *****

Should have called it " Brown Afternoon". ; )

I've been reading stories on this site since around 2005 and this is easily in the ten best stories I have ever read. Bravo!

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