All Comments on 'A Body Build for One'

cant say I liked it at all

Please find a proofreader or read the story out loud to yourself once it is written.

Many people will give up on a story with a lot of errors.

You wrote this in your native language and then ran it through a computer translator?

This reads like old import instructions, the words are there but don't quite mean what you may have meant to say.

I struggled through the first five paragraphs then gave up and scrolled to the bottom to vote 1*

Then do a better job of proof reading. And THEN post this garbage in the correct section. This is Loving WIVES! They aren't married. What part of that didn't you understand? Just plain bad.

1 * because different reasons: 1st - Not well written; 2nd - Having to go to Japan to find his girlfriend was cheating, and still want to marry her; 3rd - Demeaning japonese men, isn't a good approach...

.....just to say they are correct. Put more effort into getting your technical details correct. No story this rough should see the light of day.....unless or until its writer works on it until it shines like polished silver.

Why is this so common? Did you never learn the most basic spellings in school? Than is a comparative word and then refers to time. Why is this so fucking hard for so many people. It's especially ridiculous when "writers" make this mistake. Don be ignorant and learn.

Also, it could have done without the smarmy stereotyping regarding small Japanese cocks. Fine, the guy in your story had a small dick and that made you a much better man, no need to disparage a nation, captain brick.

How would he know when he was away so much. She was not to be trusted. Time to find a better woman.

Not helped by lines such as "she wanting me everyday to fill her womb with my seman". What a load he must shoot!

I see your stories were 1-bombed. All the 1 votes were from one religious retard making multiple Anonymous visits along with fake bios under the handles

26thNC, Harry inVA, thecarolinadreamer, Lakeeriegoatguy, KittyCampbell, Mattenw, ShadowRosie, WarGamer, Impo_58, Impo_61, Impo_64 etc., also possbly Rw43, Odiouser and Patillie among others.

This person votes multiple 5's to put a mediocre author in hall of fame for his revenge stories cutting off nuts etc., and then 1-bomb's good stories that express sexuality or cheating.

You will find repetitive comments from this person across 50% of the writers/stories in the LW category - "idiot", "garbage", "sewer", "fag", "worst writing" etc. - how can they all be the worst stories or worst writing?

In one of the bios and comments this person claims he was cucked twice but I suspect he never had sex with a woman at all and his comments express a lot of anger towards women, calling them garbage cans.

By the way, this person is a Trumpite running the same play book as Trump and his child molester fakes like Matt Gaetz - they claim to represent 90% of the people as a "majority" but it is just one person trying to destroy the world.

I would not have characterized myself as a Democratic voter, but for the next couple of elections I will vote against all the Republicans. That's the best way to vote where it makes a difference.

Anonymous bitch, you have real mental problems now. Putting me in the same sentence with Harry bag, Carolina dreamed, and Odious we is just going too far. I'm cutting you off, go kiss someone else's ass.