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so hot! i love a story about being on your knees for mom's feet and sucking her toes. so good, please continue!

Well written , an epic in the making .

Very nice! A good start to what can become a great tale of mother/son love.

I really enjoy this subject. I read it changing the son's age fro nineteen to fifteen in my mind. Oh! My! My naughty thoughts right now. You've seemed to be making me damp.

Thank You

Z924M

Please continue this exploration

I love the image in this passage: "The feeling of her body pulsating to my tongue along with the feeling of her legs wrapped around my head has my cock as hard as it has ever been." That has to be one of the greatest feelings a boy can ever have--his head between his mother's thighs, where it last was 18 or so years before, when he came out of that warm hairy hole mom's got there and she gave birth to her baby boy. Whether he's conscious of it or not, for any son his own mother's cunt exerts a power over his mind and body like nothing else. It's where he started out, where he entered life and the world from--it's his own damn birth canal! Young males yearn to use their nimble fingers on it, stroking it gently and slipping a finger or two inside. They ache to have mom plaster it against their face, so they can use their lips and tongue to slurp it half to death. Most of all, they're filled with the urge to just shove their hard fat cock right up into her cunt, her pussy, her snatch, their own mother's ever-loving twat, up to their balls, and slam and pound it smithereens. Like the saying goes, "a mother's twat is her son's playground," and sons just love making great big puddles in their own personal playground

Naughty, sexy, seductive...terrific!!!

I hope you decide to continue. I've never been particularly interested in feet, but you made it seem sexy!

Utterly fascinating, so beautifully written, by an obvious expert in the craftof painting by words.

The perfectly balanced build-up, and a wonderful climax.

Cant wait for more.

Have inadvertently clicked on 'report comment' on the comment above which praises the plotline and develops his own description of the act of incest. I meant to praise the commenter so apologise to all involved. I think the poster of the comment should link to his own writings.

Ya'all will see the comment to which I refer.

Am I the only one who would love to see the writer of that comment create his own stories?...I adore the description he paints here...please come back and share more with us.

What a great start! Mom's really lucky to have found a man in Chris.

Love it!

Very well done. Nice build up. Looking forward to next chapter.

Thanks Don

would love to do the same

How did the main character cum all over his own chest if his mom was reclining back in a chair, while he was on the floor in front of her eating her out?

Unless his dick is shaped like a U and it curves back to his chest. Otherwise....?

@Anonymous 5/2: He was kneeling by the couch while his mother sat on the edge with her legs opened for him (in a reclining position). His penis is curved slightly upwards, and the angle at which he was leaning forward resulted in a messy couch and a messy chest.

And don't ask me how I know...

I can see how it happened, but when did he get undressed???

I am happy they have each other. You created two believable characters. This initial (I'm assuming) sexual experience just made sense. Looking forward to reading more. Don't mind the critics who pick apart every fucking minute detail. You are a strong writer and the story is hot.

I had to stop and go back trying to figure out where I missed him getting undressed or even taking his cock out.I didn't miss anything.

Someone didn't get their brain working before starting this sorry tale! Quote: " because she knew that I wouldn't allow it. We had spent so much time together that I had become attached to her, wanting to go with her wherever she went, and becoming jealous of anyone and anything that kept her presence from me." A little further on, it continues; Quote: "In truth I wasn't sure why mom hadn't dated any other men during my lifetime, or rather how she was able to fend off the men who chased after her! " Need I say more? I just couldn't bear to read any further for fear of more of the same!!!

Quite a retarded way of writing, continuing to mix up present continuous and past tenses. And how/when son got naked? Probably the idiot author got ahead of himself while building up the story in his mind.