All Comments on 'A Brighton Weekend Pt. 01'

This is the first time reading the output of this author and I was pleasantly surprised. The storyline was good and believable, and I found the premise of the deception well crafted. I thought the story needed a little shortening, but the character interplay was strong. The only critique I would give from a personal point of view was that the crux of the story, the thong, was not allowed to develop in the senses of taste and smell that this find would have given and therefore the allowance to experience the lust of the character as an excitement to the reader. I will read more of the outputs written by Aimie2469. Thanks Alison xxx

loved it well written and wonderful, mad me quit wet :P

Mmm, such a hot sensual read. I loved it!

Such a wonderful story! More please!

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Lovely little story. Your descriptions of the sex scene are exquisitely detailed and delightful. I really enjoyed the little predicament Aimie found herself in where she couldn't reveal her trick. By the time Cassie told her to roll over so that she could have her way with Aimie's beautiful butt, I was in heaven.

To be entirely honest, I found myself reading this story in a Brighton accent, and that was enough to turn me into a mewling mess. I'm not sure if I was meant to or not. I don't think the story ever mentioned where Aimie is from. In any case, there is just something about the way English women speak that makes my heart flutter with joy.

Very erotic tale of hotel seduction and sex: we all turn up at hotels imagining such possibilities! As always with the really good erotica here, the convincing narrative voice means that although this story describes - in delicious detail - a lesbian encounter, the psychological truth in the lead character transcends the sexual labels: any of us, regardless of our gender, could feel this arousal, this passion. Thank you!

I loved the way you wove the story, the discovery of the elicit activity and her subsequent returning. The fortuitous finding of the thong and the reverse seduction. Simply amazing and you wonderful description of them making love, the act that Aimie was able to barely hang onto as she reacted to Cassie. Truly masterful.

Will they invite the Supervisor to join them in a sapphic threesome? THAT would be soooooooo sexy!!

Wonderful story. I loved the build up and the exquisite use of language, to enhance the hot sex. Can’t wait to read Chapter 2.

Lovely and erotic. Only the anal aspects spoiled it for me. I've never been into that.

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