All Comments on 'A Bronx Boy Fills His Dream Girl'

Thank you for your lovely story <3 I fell in love with the couple too!

Sweet poignant and funny def was drawn into story

Aside from a few grammatical errors was highly arousing and sensual. Want more please!!!

Such a funny, intense, and deeply heartfelt story. Daisy and Vincent were made for each other,

Loved it! A few editing issues but the story itself was great.

Your handling of personality traits reveals a deep understanding of behavior psychology. Development of the characters was absolutely astounding. My complements to your inner gift to live through this story and capture the emotions and display them. A very well written story about difficult subjects.

Looking forward to Dreamscape 2

This is hands down one of the best stories I've read on here. The character development was great. They're quite equal in the relationship power dynamic, which many stories lack. Truly well written

this is a wonderful,awesome and amazing story!! :)) thanks bunches Eroticdreamescape!! :))

Sequel please. I love this

Verbose !!!!!!!!

It was Good-especially the character sketches.They seem real and relatable. It could have been better ,though.