All Comments on 'A Brother's Choice'

agreed with the other comments, keep working on your english spelling

Learning how to use punctuation. The story is decent, but difficult to read.

But the point of story is the love of brother and sister. Which is greater? Being loved or never being loved.

I thought the story was sweet. A bit short on describing the sex but over all a good story sensitively told.

Damn some folk are happy to read about incest but as soon as "a rule" is broken they report it. Ffs what a condesending little prick you are, you even stay anonymous to hide yourself.

Your probably a balding ugley little five foot nothing with a two inch pecker that cant get it up that has reported it.

Do us all a favour yea, drop dead !!

To the auther, loved the story, simpathetic but was not happy with the rape bit, sorry !!

A little perverted, but tender. Why no kissing or at least some affection between Martin and Tina after he "Raped" her until she realized she was pregnant. I gave you 5 stars because my cock was hard all the time.

Use speech marks.

If a boy had a child with his sister, that child would be his niece/nephew, definitely not his daughter/son. You are quite mistaken here, as only having children with your parents can give you siblings. Because of this huge mistake, it's very hard to understand after MarTina, Kimmie, and Tina-(Marie or Martine or Matrine? You say all three) are born and all of them, including his only actual sister, are called his little sisters. The story also never has Martin and Tina actually getting married, you just say they move in as a married couple. Saying you're a married couple does not automatically make you married. The story is good, or at least has the potential to be good if it wasn't so touch-and-go!!! It's hard to follow, and is not worth the extra time and energy. Try harder next time. You really have the story, and it's good, just ask somebody to read it through before you publish it so you can fix these mistakes.

I loved the whole story but the last part of him having sex with his daughters was totally unnecessary.

Just ignore negative about incest. You made story great. I love it. 5 Stars. Favorite story.

...and that is what this story was...Date Rape....Ugh!

Could not get logged in but will put my name - WSteven1

The story was about as wholesome as a brother-sister non-con story can get, but was the little part about the father/uncle fucking his daughter/niece really necessary?

This story looks like an incest galimatias from a little and insecure perv writter. You suck, man !

I have to say, that first page alone was really beautiful.

Definitely a different incest tale.

Hi,

Your probably no longer writing as it has been 4 years since the last was posted, but I want to thank you for writing this story.

One of the best I have ever read.

Rob

The planned rape thing was over the line. Everything else was good.

and this is how nobles work

I absolutely loved this story thank you for posting it

I really enjoyed this, more than you can imagine. When you write about loving your sister so much that you want to mingle with her on the DNA level, that could be my very own thoughts. Still unrealized in my case, but still, you put my own thoughts into words, and I admire that.

I'm... Not sure how I feel about this 😂 The mistakes really messed up the flow and the whole constant "brother sister" thing really made it difficult to understand. Like the end was starting to really mess with me. Saying Martin or Tina is easier than brother, sister, daughter sister, etc. It was a good story but just how it was written really killed some of my enjoyment. I wanna give it 5 stars but then I wanna give it 3 but I really did like it I wanna do 5 😭😂 This story killed my brain