by mintabal3239
I enjoyed your style with dual viewpoints of a delicate problem and an explanation of the culture reinforced the love they have for each other.
The dual viewpoints were a nice touch to a good story. I like it when incest stories are more about the love than the sex.
This expresses the truth that often in human life, ordinary morality is not a guide for what must be done for the benefit of all, and, after all, what is done from love, including making love, is best.
i think its wrong for the mother in law to want banu (akka) to take another mans sperm without objection, and i'm glad that she conceived natrually so she knows what the child's future will hold.
Yes, I enjoyed your story. It is written in such away that I take it to be true. Although a little unsual with two authors. It was still fun reading!
wrongly portrait of whole Indian culture. This may be happening only in the author'e part. Nonetheless it was a good subject.
Novel solution to a common problem. Characters’ emotions were well described. Thank you