All Comments on 'A Brother's Love Ch. 04'

This is a good story so far.

The chapters are a little too short and the writing style can sometimes confuse as to the setting/location of the story, but I do want to read the rest.

When will the next one be posted?

Just finishing up chapter 5 now so it should be with you (if the Literotica folks approve) within the next week or so. Thanks for the comments too, they're a great help - it's hard to read a story from an outside perspective! :) Thanks for reading x