All Comments on 'A Bun in the Oven'

How can she love him dearly if she is always fucking someone else and degrading everything he does

Thanks for the comment.

Second last line - literary artifice!!

Fiction. Erotic? For some yes, others NO!! It is in the eyes of the beholder.

DNA studies show that a surprising number of first born children are not the husband's offspring. I could go into the behavioural basis of that but it is not relevant to this story.

Considering the subject matter it would probably be better suited for LW or Group.

When I purchased a copy of Anais Nin's _Delta_of_Venus_. It's that good.

I basically wrote the story for another site called Wife Lovers. In that rendition I was able to include photos of the protagonists, and foetal scans of the baby development right through to breast feeding.

It attracted quite a following with people offering to buy the mother's milk.

How gullible can some people be. It was all web shit!!