All Comments on 'A Bus Journey to Remember'

?????? So what happens next?????

I hope you update soon this is so good!

Very wonderful hot story... well written.. Love to have been her.. even though... more please

More please

Write more.

Good story hope you are going to do more with it ..

Thank you for sharing this story. I loved it and I can't wait for anything else that you have.

Sequel please

Hottest story ive read in a while, great work!

Yum.

I wonder if her father will ask for seconds, I would.

It was great, I hope there's more on the way.

I agree..... Sequel please!!

I enjoyed your short quick read. Exciting as it was the early on development was very good, Not a lot of in depth emotional content simply an unfolding of the plot. Good job.

With daddy get another go?

Loved the way you described their bodies felt and moved. Very hot and satisfying!

But sounds a lot like stranger on a train by Ashson except it's the father and not a stranger.

Stiil having sex with other people around not knowing what is going on is hot.

How embarrassing. ;)

Fucking my daddy like this is my ultimate fantasy! Please write more :)

I love the "sitting on lap" stories, as the provide a guilt free way of family members fucking, coupled with the thrill of potentially being caught.

Also loved how you left it open at the end, when they need to come to grips with the fact that they just fucked.

Very good story. Well written. 5*s

I would fuck that bitch

Super hot. Love the emotions expressed.

When are you going to add more chapters to this story.

One of the best storries I have ever read and amazingly written, 5 stars!!!

Super hot. I love that it was all an accident. Hope you write more soon.

Very hot-what happens next

I always keep coming back to this hot and steamy piece. What can I say? Five stars.

I must have read this story at least 10 times, every time I need to cum and quickly, I come back to this story and it gets me wet and orgasming in no time.. I really wish you'd write some more ^^

excellent work! :D

This has to be the best story I've read. It's my go-to so often, and gets me there every time.

It's that innocent little fantasy that allows for the taboo, and still remains sexy as hell.

Well done!

Wow that almost made me cum without any stimulation, my cock is still rock hard!

I just wondering how the father's short being push down? Is he not wearing a underwear??

Lit

Very good story

Lit as a lightbulb

Please write more, and let another accidental penetration one be-maybe even a continuation with the same family, she ends up having this happen again, but with a family member who is a guest over the holidays or on a family reunion vacation when she falls with her swimsuit on and the crotch slides off to the side or after breakfast she slips in the kitchen onto her Dad's friend or uncle after everyone else has just left for the day.

This story makes me wetter than any pornographic video ever could. It's simply perfect. The buildup, the resistance, the reluctance mixed in with the natural biological desires... it has everything that I look for in an incest story, and more. I would so appreciate it if there was a sequel in which the father and the daughter slowly fall for each other, romantically, after their little incident. That would be amazing. You have only published one work but I already love your writing. Keep on doing what you're doing.

This subject matter is usually a pretty big turnoff for me, but you've managed to make this one of, if not the, best story I've read in quite some time. I'm waiting with baited breath to see what you'll give us next!

Other than the dad part, this is one of my more reckless fantasies.

More people wrote accidental sex stories ... but without the incest part

It's a shame you didn't give us more of your work thou,you have a great talent!

And for the last anonymous comment,I totally disagree.The BEST accident sex stories are incest ones! Bar none....

I always like accidental Lap penetrations and similar works, but not any story captivates me the way yours did,.. great work

I rode my brother's dick once on a bus.

hnnng this was hot as fuck, and I'm a gay man. You should make a sequel where Dad is gay and his mate Richard is his husband, and this story happens to Daughter again. woof woof.

I know I'm a bad gay. x.x

i love when the cock slip back and forth along her pussy lips

hot AF

really well described

I hope they continue their affair

So damn hot! Got me so wet and horny for this to happen to me omg!! Mmmm

why do accidents like this not happen to me mind my daughters nothing to feel proud of

Author please before I die I need to see a sequel to this story! One of the best from Literotica!!! Please!!! Im begging you. Give us an update!! You are such a good writer!!! Its a fkn shame you dont write more!!

Oh noo I see that your profile was last modified 2015, did you lose your password!?? Author come back!!