All Comments on 'A Cabin Meeting'

Well written, really captures the erotica with words. Might have used a little more set-up (who are these people, what's their relationship, etc.) but still, very enjoyable read.

A couple rents a mountain cabin and catches Cabin fever - the erotic kind. The only cure is to get it on - which they proceed to do. Appropriately playing on the radio - Patsy Cline singing, "Crazy!" Delicious Read! Well written!

Lynn,

Loved every minute of your story. Made me hard thinking of you and him doing the deed on the deck of a lakeside cabin. Keep on writing.

Fantastic..... It makes me want to go and do this all with Foof!!

Loved the quick pace, and the ending was wonderful...

Brilliant Lynn,, when's the next one?!

That was an erotic and taut piece of writing. I've read very few first efforts that good. Congratulations!

Well done, Lynn, a GREAt first submission - very arousing and well written. Hope this will inspire you to write more.

I loved this story. The cream pie at the end was the icing on the cake.I felt a close connection with the woman in this story,both physically and emotionally.Shes a keeper!

your good with rhetoric..was easy reading..told the story well and allowed a pure sensuality to reek from its contents...your a hottie i knew it ... just loved to read the written word from you....dave

Tight, erotic and hot. Every bit as wonderful as the first time I read it. Fantastic job Lynn !!!!!!

Trent

Your story made me rock hard, Lynnette!