All Comments on 'A Café with a View Ch. 01'

Your biker story is EXTREMELY EXTREMELY EXTREMELY hot! I loved your waitress character! She is sweet and spicy, soft-hearted and wild, all at the same time.

KW, this wad a terrific short story. With minimal words you revealed the character of your characters. And with brief descriptions of the background gave this story a real depth and intensity of reality.

# 1 You people scare me.

.... deviation from your usual 'audio' format. Loved it, can't wait to see how all this pans out. The hog obviously has something on his mind, something in store for 'arsehole' Tony perhaps???

Good! Be scared. Be very scared!

Hopefully you won't be reading my stories any more and the rest of us can enjoy the thrill of the ride without you. Go off with your fluffy bunny, and don't read big bad ladies' stories before bedtime again.

Boo!

Thank you for the great feedback.

Part 2 should be posting soon - look out for it :)

I can't wait to read more. Such a rich character and authentic voice. I adore a short short and this was sublime.

The guy could have at least had the courtesy to leave the bike running so his cock would vibrate for her. 0~`o

Absolutely loved it. And hope I have time tomorrow to give part two a read. Truly delicious and save me a bun and some coffee for breakfast. Sweet and white.

MST

Very well written. I love your writing style and think it is some of the best I have seen here on literotica.

I have just written my first ever story and would love for you to read it and let me know your thoughts and critique.

(A Tale of Two Wives 001)

granoldad