All Comments on 'A Caged Bird Sings'

by YKN4949

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scarf7cescarf7ceover 11 years ago
love your style

Loved it as usual. Can we get a buxom dominant hung ebony chick as the Gillian maybe? Forcefully taking all that tight tgirl ass? Off to rub one out till the next time! PS I love ur work

thatlonewolfthatlonewolfover 11 years ago
regular feedback :P

i like it! :)

i seriously like it a lot, i kinda was afraid you'd make it (a bit stereotypical) a place of violence, hate and such

but i really like the 'prison', i'm looking forward to seeing more action

both blowjob scenes were insanely hot! got me on the edge

i also love all 4 the Tgirls, McKenzie, Prisha, Clara and Odessa

the perfect mix, especially McKenzie :P

any scene between these 4 would make something fantastic, maybe Prisha and Clara are roommates as well and are known to 'fool around' or maybe a debt has to be payed? or Clara and McKenzie show how much they love each other and don't mind if someone watches (maybe participates?)

once again great job on the new series, really like it and you know i look forward to anything coming from you :P

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
annyy

good story!! asiatiquE trans!! best asss maybe other trans bataille with blond for favour asiatique and best trans protect asiatique

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Curious to see whats next

A little sappy for a "prison" story, but not in a bad way. Very curious to see what comes next. Will it be brutally realistic? Prison fantasy? While I am always a fan of fantasy erotica, the realistic type stories are interesting because few authors seem to be able to really do it. It can be scary, ugly and I guess most folks do not want that in their eroitca. But if it is part of a whole story, especially a prison story, I think it could make the story stronger.

My 2cents...

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Amazing

Great story, can't wait for the second part

voyagersknightvoyagersknightover 11 years ago
Love It

Can't wait for next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
MOAR!!!

the provided level of material relevant to my interests is insufficient to meet my personal required needs.

but seriously, I definitely want more of this. great start.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
WOW

I love the fact that it is not the normal brutal prison story. The level of erotica you present in this story is so arousing! Please continue this story line. I really look forward to your next installment!

titsandwichtitsandwichabout 11 years ago
wow

very good an interesting way to have a prison story but it does kinda make sense i mean in normal prission the only thing they have in common is the prison but in this case they all have the T-girl thing so there more likly to work together. i like the idea of this and im wondering who shes gunna be with or if she just is with multiple people

P.S sorry if i was rambling a bit with this its late and im tired but i wanted to finish reading this story

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Decent

I enjoyed your other few shemale stories and this one has potential. But I def feel like there is not as much character development. I hope to find out I am wrong in the next chapter :D

jmw744jmw744about 8 years ago
I like it.

I sorry I meant to hit 4 stars. The story was good.

Randee1958Randee1958about 8 years ago
Edge of my seat.😉

I've enjoyed the start of what you've created. So I've given you 5 stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Very erotic.

I love it. I am a writer myself and I loved this entire thing. Would you please keep writing?

blackkittykat69blackkittykat69over 7 years ago
Very nice

Loved the story and hope to read more keep them Cumming (giggles) love ts prison stories

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

this was very erotic

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
This is going to be great!

First chapter and I am Addicted! Tranny prison is an awe inspiring concept!

Benzguy280Benzguy280over 6 years ago
Outstanding

Love reading the first chapter very hot.and a rousing! Now that's a hot sexy jail love the T-Girls.

NormaJaneNormaJaneover 6 years ago
Superb

YKN4949 Your transsexual stories are superb. You are the doyenne of writers of such stories, because you combine maximum coverage of the sex acts with maximum quality of style. The two combine, of course, to yield the greatest enjoyment. You vary handle the settings skilfully and create atmosphere. Your characters go beyond mere bodies, too. Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
More porn for chasers yay

I wish for once something listed under 'transgender' didn't just totally objectify trans women's bodies for the sexual gratification of those who fetishes us. Like I have needed to! Can't we have a story with a trans protagonist where her desires are centered? One where she's treated as a character with agency, someone who drives the plot forwards instead of just getting used and going along with it.

ShortyMacShortyMacabout 2 years ago

To be honest I wasn’t sure I’d like this storyline, but it was very well written story. Now I can’t wait to read what happens next. You’re a talented writer. Thanks. Now I’m going to have to check out what else you have written.

Mukul10Mukul10almost 2 years ago

Love it really nicely written ...

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