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All Comments on 'A Captain's Call'

by RaeynaRed

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
A story...

in search of an ending.

eyeamtwistedeyeamtwistedover 8 years ago
New fan

Ah yes, sweet dreams

I enjoy your writings. Thank you

James

PoeticPlayPoeticPlayover 8 years ago
There is wet and then there is WET

The waves of relief were worth the wade.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
That ending needs work.

Storyline is great, have some tense issues, but the ending is a total cop-out...

Anonymous
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