All Comments on 'A Captured Heart Ch. 03'

just picked up on reading this story. Definitely looking forward to more.

just another asshole writer that starts a story and doesent finish.I hope your lover gets laid tonite and your not there when it happens.

WHAT THE HELL????

Another anonymous jerk who is too cowardly to comment to someone's face (so to speak). I really wish that this site would get rid of the anonymous feedback and make people stand behind their opinions.

That said, the below arse should be reported to Lit and banned from this site. Oh, and make sure that it's identity is made public.

I love your stories but......well the love scenes are better than your fight scenes. I hope you won't take this the wrong way, you're a great story teller and all but, you suck at fight scenes.

Please continue??