All Comments on 'A Carol's Christmas'

Very good story with some novelty .....

EXCEPT

Usual "White Woman Fantasises about Black Cock"

And the Author, sadly, writes in rote.

Get over it.

A "2" for the actual good writing.

Nepomuk77 (Cannot sign in - Error 404 Keeps coming up)

Dickens? You write porn.

Just a Christmas submission, but I definitely will accept constructive criticism. I appreciate the votes!

Ho-ho-ho, this was a funny story, nice. To the usual white woman fantasy criticism, I say bah humbug. It takes two to tango, most of it starts either in school, college or work and not staring at some profile. Mine was an affair with a black office colleague, he was good looking, educated, could hold a conversation and he was fun, also ten years younger and he noticed that little extra cleavage, we'd been working together for two years. We were at a typical after hours company event, drinks, small plates, conversation; he stood next to me at the crowded bar, my breasts pushing into him as someone else squeezed by us and he got hard. The tango started an hour later with us kissing and him fondling my tits in my office, soon I was on my desktop, legs up with my younger colleague's very hard, black cock fucking me, it was hot, exciting and fun. Sometimes the fun was in my office, our cars, hotels or even up against a tree in the park. It was hot fun for a year, then he moved on.