All Comments on 'A Case of Torture: Trial of Love 1'

A submissive of Mine referred Me to this story. I am usually very leery about reading new material, but was quite

enthralled by it. I couldn't stop reading until I finished.

I applaud your detailed description and thought process.

Congratulations in bringing to print, a deep dark fantasy

of Mine that I will be thinking about for weeks to come.

Wow that was very descriptive. Some of the stuff she did made me cringe and i'm not even a guy but at the same time it was exciting.

Good writing, keep up the good work.

well ya learn somethig new every day, huh. thanks for the great read, the descriptions were great, alot of the time the descriptions of variouse frames and devices can be baffling, but you did really well on that count, you really "took" me there, gave me that fly on the wall feeling, like i was in the room...millisande

Great story!

Very hot!

give us some more. You might want to use a hollow sound with a rubber tube leading to a rubber mouth stretcher to which the tube can be connected directly from him or another.

What's Love got to do with it?

I liked the descriptions of the torturing and you told of some new ways of controlling and manipulating a cock which I enjoyed but you sort of lost me when trying to convey the reasons of why she does it. You might need to try this again I don't quite buy your reasons and explanations, I think she does it simply because she enjoys inflicting the pain and gets off to it, and that's okay.

I loved this the first time I read it, and even more today.

Very hot!

I love the torture limited by no permanent damage but I wonder about danger of bladder bursting or of backflow toward kidneys?

Of course I know this is fantasy so I make allowances.

I also like how you are keeping the torture within the context of a loving relationship.

EDITING NOTE... overall excellent writing but... It's hard to know who is speaking when you don't follow the convention of starting a new paragraph when a different person starts speaking.