by loststars
I am really enjoying this new tale. My only complaint is that I wish the chapters were longer. I also wanted to say that I hope you finish your other story as well I look forward to your next chapter.
Way too short. Plz try writing more and build chapers of around triple amount of content at least.
Let's have something about his genitalia. Don't they have the penis of a stallion and the testicles, too? Well, don't just thump it! Put both hands around it, and pump it!
Build in some more characters
Develop the plot
Longer chapters
Plot is more valuable than sex right now