by slyc_willie
My god, that was an excellent story. They're going to meet up one day, right? Good writing. Keep it up and give us the next chapter soon.
Its pretty rare to get emotionally involved in a porn story, but Ill be damned if I didnt get a little misty eyed at the ending. >_<
Amazing story Looking forward to next one. "Clean your own fucking house."
Perfect!!!
It had some nice moments, but for a story set around a poker tournament, it would have been nice if the author had some familiarity with either poker or tournaments.
Great story, spoiled by the lack of a good proof reader. His glass of milk mysteriously became orange juice. Spelling mistakes. Etc.