All Comments on 'A Chance Encounter Ch. 04'

Please keep this one going

Just more

Damn man, don't stop now, this is one hot, hot werewolf story and I'm loving every word of it. I think one of the comments said there was that you did not give enough background information on Eric which quite a few writers also do not do. The background information helps to define the character in the reader's mind. Other than that minor fault, the story is very well written with excellent plot and character development. Your interaction between Cassie and Eric is well written with the right degree of realisem to make it believable. You are the 1st writer I have read who shows the transformation taking place in stages rather than all at once which is almost always the case. But there is nothing wrong with the way you have written and I am kind of liking the slow transformation of Eric into his full wolf. So please do not be like 85-90% of writers on this site that do not finish their stories and leave many, many frustrated readers. Retired Army NCO

Thanks!