All Comments on 'A Chance Meeting Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Cute Twist

I enjoyed it. Lots of detail and a fun twist. I look forward to other titles.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Sweet

Nice story, and excellent plot. I hope you write a sequel.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
WOW !!!

Can't wait for your next story.What I love is a story that does not waste pages and pages on a lot of padding before getting to the point. Great, carry on writing.

ReiDeBastosReiDeBastosabout 8 years ago
The "surprise" ending was telegraphed...

...by the quotation marks around the word "strangers" in the description.

Other than that, it was very enjoyable.

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