All Comments on 'A Change in Lifestyle Vol. 01'

by TheMadKing

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
ho hum

has potential... let me know when you've posted the last chapter and I'll read the lot.

hard to get interested with so little content.

mcbtwsmcbtwsover 11 years ago
Stop

Now, please!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
xxxx

liked it, but too short....write more

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
ONCE AGAIN A FAIL

where's the plot, where's the bckground, where's the character development? this was way to rushed this should be chapter two and twice as long or longer. delete and do it properly.

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