All Comments on 'A Change in the Air'

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ender2k2kender2k2kover 9 years ago
Wow, great story.

I must admit the beginning had me a bit confused. But once I got sorted out the story really came to life. Thanks.

germanchocolate4ugermanchocolate4uover 9 years ago

This is only my 3rd time in the non-human category. The first was to read the story, Blood and Power from an author I have come to love in the Lesbian Sex section but after reading this rich, visual and tantalizing story, I will be visiting this category and reading more of your work. Great job - Thank you

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

I would read a whole novel about Bartleby - you did some great world building and created a fascinating character.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I must admit You really made me smile.

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