All Comments on 'A Charmed Life Ch. 02'

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BigChiefBigChiefover 8 years ago
Rachel & Dennis

Rachel and Dennis (with a spinal injury that leaves him unable to walk).

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

A Flare signal from Rachel. Dennis had died from sUn exposure on a couple days before.

Legit_mustrzLegit_mustrzover 8 years ago
Next chapter

A flare from Rachel,Dennis died from undiagnosed multiple mylinoma (blood cancer)

dreamer889dreamer889over 8 years ago
Romantic Aaron and Miranda

It can be another ship. I don't want it to be Rachel or Dennis to interrupt their romantic "honeymoon".

10speed10speedover 8 years ago
a charm in itself

just make him think he saw a light but nothing and they continue they're island life

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Nice

A nice story that needs to be continued. Perhaps he sees a ship but decides against signaling it as he would prefer his island life and wants "stepmom" to have more of his children. Imagine the rescue in 5 years as the boy leads his family with four little girls and his heavily pregnant stepmother to the beach for the rescue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

It could be the coast guard and everyone else had already been found dead and they were left a huge life insurance policy. They go home to bury they others and decide to go back to the island and build an extravagant home for themselves. They eventually have more kids than the.duggars that all fuck each other make a bigger family. Lol

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

It should be Rachel with no Dennis so they could start a three-way relationship before getting rescued

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
There is no way,

three months on a raft. So maybe it is a search and rescue vehicle, or maybe just fishermen.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Leave it on the island!

I absolutely love this story. I like the idea of it being Rachel by herself although it may be hard to explain. Whatever you do I'm looking forward to the continuation of this story.

AverygoodlayAverygoodlayover 8 years ago
Great 2nd chapter

Her getting pregnant was a give me as all the fucking and no birth control.

Rescue ship looking for them and when found they decide to stay on the island.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Rescue

I think they should be rescue after all he does live a Charmed Life

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
rescue

rachel to the rescue and with all their money to stay on the island as a three some

PeperePepereover 8 years ago
Rescue

They have to be rescued, probably by the Coast Guard that has already found Rachel. They collect insurance and live as a threesome, ending up with 6 children between them.

There's no way they should be left on the island.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
future

She will become a pregnant and God send them a obstetrician. By accident the obstetrician suppose to be his cousin...

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftover 8 years ago
Only Rachel not Dennis.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Has to be rescue and or Rachel.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Direction

Kind of agree, Rachel not Dennis. Need new blood to raise generations on the island!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
not 1 but 2

I think that it being Rachel...who is also pregant would be excellent. Could have a variety of pregnant m/f, m/f/f or f/f scenes for chapters until the babies are birn and beyond. The only limits are your desired pacing and end goal

vicencio2222vicencio2222over 8 years ago
no denis

Preferably a pregnant rachel... but a rescue boat would be nice

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Must be Rachel

It must be Rachel. Then story can be extended by threesomes ffm.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Rachel

She is pregnant but farther along. She didn't think she could get pregnant, her doctors told her it all but impossible. She never worried about birth control. Dennis survived the ship wreak, but was injured badly and didn't live long on the island

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Yay baby time

Have it be Rachel saving them but cook up some reason for them to be more intimate. Have more hot pregnant sex. Give her some more mood swings and progress pregnancy. Then maybe have that dream come true and deliver baby. Maybe having Miranda and Rachel bred in cycle one then three months knock up the other.

charliebillcharliebillover 8 years ago
Nice Deserted Island Story

My favorite ending for these incest (or No) is where the women gets pregnant and both parties are excited about it. Pregnancy is my biggest turn as one of your male readers!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Not yet

I know it sounds inevitable, but I think it would be better if Miranda weren't pregnant yet. Let 'em have some more fun on the island, before their lives burdened and sex drives diminished by a screaming infant. This is after all Literotica, not Lifetime or Disney. There's plenty of time for that after they're rescued.

The flare off in the distance points to another person in distress. It's unlikely that Rachel could survive this long at sea, so perhaps she was part of a crew coming back to look for them, and her ship went down again? Luck o' the Irish, indeed!

Either way, I've really enjoyed this series so far, but prefer chapter 1 for the aforementioned reasons.

Oh, and for everyone who challenges the incest category - Miranda is also Aaron's aunt, so between aunt and step-mother, I think it's covered.

Kookaburra8Kookaburra8over 7 years ago
Rachel took his cherry BUT in return he gave her a baby..

I think Rachel made him a Dad before Miranda did. If you recall when Aaron deposited his sperm in her, she said , just do it. I think he will or should I say both are in for a surprise when they get rescued. I think he'll end up with two beautiful women both with his child. Who will he pick or will the women decided for him ? It's quite sad really because I liked Rachael's character I hope she doesn't miss out because of Miranda.. either way great story so far 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟.

Aussie1951Aussie1951almost 7 years ago
Kookaburra8 as made a good point

Interestingly I to have a soft spot for Rachel and the same thought crossed my mind. Can't wait for the next chapter to see what happens ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I think that Miranda should be telling her adult children about the wreckage and rescue as a flashback.

Be Well and Happy!!

REB1961REB1961over 1 year ago

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