All Comments on 'A Charmed Life Ch. 03'

finish the story about life off the island

We really do need to know what happened when they got back to civilisation.

Just a couple of things. . . You really need to find another way to say YES. Your constant use of "Ya Ya Ya " irritated the hell out of me. But, that's just me. There were also 3 or 4 misspellings or typos but, they did not detract from the 5 I gave you although you pushed it with the "ya".

Great story keep them coming

At first I was pissed at Dennis for rejecting Rachel like that and almost causing her death, so I wanted him to die in a painful way. But after reading the last page I forgive him. Now for the final chapter, I want to read what happened after they leave the island, a breakdown telling us the names of the children, who gave birth to who, and who is pregnant with another child.

I agree with the rest, this story needed closure. There's too many unanswered questions. What happened when they got back home.????

I enjoyed this one. While I'm sure I would enjoy an epilogue story, I'm good with it ending as it did. Thank you!

I agree with the others comments, this story isn't finished ..... ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Very charming indeed! I hope you’ll add more to it! Thank you!

Nice dispatch of Dennis. One more chapter would be welcomed.

Great series, from beginning to end. Would there be more, would like to know what happens after their life on the island.

Wonderful story. Did they inherit the seemingly substantial estate? I am guessing that the wife and heir would be the beneficiaries.

very good story. I think the ending was weak.

Well written. Loved the ending.

A really good story, the ending was good. AAA+++

I feel kind of late to the party. Loved this story. Guess I'll have to read more of your work. Again, well done. A+.

What a great story, he ended up with the two loves of his life along with a raft of kids all of which were his and his two women. And they all lived happily ever after. Well done 5 stars

Great story, when does the next chapter come out?

Good story but would be nice to know how things where for them after the island.

THANK YOU for a really fun to read story!!! Gave you nothing but 5*, but wish it could be more.

Yea need to know what happened after rescue

Getting tired of all these pregnancies, but I guess they had to procreate in order to set the stage for possible incest since there has been none so far . . . .

With the money that Aaron and Miranda inherited from Nathan, and with the wise investments made with the time they were gone, Miranda and Aaron bought the island, built a really nice place for Arron, Miranda and Rachael and family to live. Their kids were homeschooled with tutors and when old enough, went to school on a nearby settled island met their future husbands and wifes and Arron Miranda and Rachael lived happily ever after on the island. Great story as ususal!!!

Who was the wife and who was the mistress when they rejoined society? Might have flipped from the hierarchy on the island. Lot of places are intolerant of stepmom marrying a stepson. Interesting story, though the full page of lesbian action somehow being mind blowing for both was a bit silly.