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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Bizarre, Titillating, and Strangely Compelling

You sir, have crafted something unique here. The concept is repulsive and fascinating in equal measure and your prose is satisfactorily sultry for the venue, but the psyche of your protagonist is what gives the story its impact. Bravo.

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