All Comments on 'A Chatty Mum'

Brilliant - well done, loved it. xx Ken

Great lead on from Rudely Interrupted. Keep going, olease

The story started off a little slow, but when it got to the erotic part,

Wow.

It was very good, and even though the story was very erotic, I felt that there is a lot of love in the story.

I would love to read what happened when Ben came home at the end of the story. I would think the stud would know he better be on his "A" game to keep up with his mom.

Thanks for the read.

"He's going to find out that I've decided our one-off should be a two-off. At least. "

I was so glad to find this line there at the end. This is an excellent story that has endless possibilities. It can go so much farther. And in so many different directions.

I consider myself most fortunate to have discovered this author.

"He's going to find out that I've decided our one-off should be a two-off. At least. "

I was so glad to find this line there at the end. This is an excellent story that has endless possibilities. It can go so much farther. And in so many different directions.

I consider myself most fortunate to have discovered this author.

I've read your Becky story, and it was high quality, then I look in your index and I found this.

Unbelievable.

As I said, I will be back to read all your other stories, it is not common to find this quality, thank you

5 stars only because that's all we're allowed to give. To those who say one page is not long enough for a good short story have obviously not read this. Added as favorite author.

Thanks for sharing.

What can I say thathas not already been said. Superb writing. Had me so hard and cumming wishing I was Ben

of hot son into mom fucking? This is a marvelous tale of 19 year old Ben discovering that his mother has put her mommy-hole--that wonderful hole between her legs that her boy came into the world from--at the free disposal of her darling baby boy. And does big strong Ben ever take advantage of it! He takes his big fat teenage prick, slides it up his between his mother's legs, and just tears up his mommy's fabulous cunt. They find that the boy's big stiff prick and his mother's wet twat are a perfect match, and Ben unloads his young balls up the very same cunt he came out of. It's the most intimate of couplings, and mom cums like crazy, reveling in the great big doses of creamy sperm her boy has shot up into her. Any chance this'll be the last time Ben fucks his mother? Naa. He'll be doing it over and over again, for years to come.

You do have a flair for this. I like the Briticisms.

You do have a knack for this.

loved her changing her mind-nice seduction-hot sex scenes-nicely written-thanks

... as a general rule. they are usually so lame, juvenile and poorly written.

this was the exception - on all counts. hot, sexy, tender, loving and really well written.

thank you.

I am sure that you will be doing some more great writing and you can be assured that I will. as many other's, will be there to carry on reading your works of pleasure.

Thanks Loads.

"it might be wrong for some, but was perfect for Ben and I."

So, it was perfect for Ben, and was perfect for I. Huh???

Please! "Ben and I" fucked, yes. And, This fuck was perfect for Ben and ME.

Meaning, it was perfect for Ben, and perfect for ME, (not perfect for I). Sheesh!

Very hot nonetheless!

However, I think your preamble before your son arrived was a tad too 'chatty,' but I'm being picky.

I could so easily see the situation in my mind that it was quick to arouse me - and it just got hotter and hotter.

And all in just one page too! Would take me three pages to replicate this scenario.

Excellently put together.

Chris

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I've been reading your stories and I have to say that you are the most coherent writer that I have encountered on here. You build the story beautifully and believably. The waiting is excruciatingly delicious. The climax (pun intended) is... very satisfying esthetically and erotically. I have read other comments on your stories and I have to say that the negative ones have all been written by men who just want a quick jerk off session. I can't understand them. Being male myself; I love the build up, the details. In my experience, the best erotica has always been written by women (Anais Nin is a favorite of mine). Keep up the skilled, educated, beautifully phrased prose and ignore the haters. You are a jewel who is wasted on them.

At last, someone who knows how to use the English language. I'm an American male of some age and I have to say except for a couple of typos, this was one the best written one page stories on this website. Thank you very much for the story and your writing.

I always enjoy the mental side of the seduction and you've a great knack in expressing it. Lucky Ben, lucky you, and lucky us. 5 for sure.

It is rare to have this degree of insight into the art of seduction and rationalization.

Your description of her process almost made the sex anticlimatic. Bravo

J9

very nice,mother and son together,enjoying each other,no one getting hurt.reminds me of my mother,very hot.thanks.

Glad that one & off is not over

Nice 'surprise' story. A chatty mom should chat more: more dialog, inadvertent confessions, over sharing, risque comments in public, which lead to 'trouble'.

You are by far.......the BEST mother/son author on Lit. BAR NONE!!🙌🏽👑

And this is very similiar to how my mother and I came to be together. Beautifully written and very well told. I'd say that not only is this the best I've read for a short story on Lit, its as if you were writing this from a very real and wonderful experience. Thank you. This is truly a hidden gym within the Lit world.

Excelleny story. Thank you.

Wonderful story! Glad I found you, looking forward to reading through your work! :)

What a fickle mummy, Ben is a really lucky young fella. Seems to have pussy on tap there. The way you write it enhances the naughtiness of it all, mum is well aware of that naughtiness, and not trying to justify an illegal and immoral relationship. Delicious!