All Comments on 'A Cheating Wife'

With a mind that faulty, I'm surprised she 'breezed through' graduate school in a mere eight years. 5/5!!!

Why move out? A little extra-marital canoodling keeps the fires burning - and what's good for the goose is good for the gander! Gather ye rosebuds ... - and new pussy! Five stars.

I found it strange not knowing exactly what happened.

Good but too short.

She's a toss-her. Lies, cheats, berating towards her husband. The trifecta of infidelity! - TANSTAAFL

No wonder it took her 8 years to get through grad school. Dumb as a stump.

Why write? No doubt she needs lovers…if ur lovemaking is anywhere like ur writing…she won’t ever have been satisfied ..

Ur two pumps and cum type person in life as I can deduce dorm ur writings

Ask me no questions and I'll you no lies!

5

yea, no.

you spend time with your ex lovers and you're out the door. modern women are really fucking stupid if they try to sell men that it's okay to do that. especially since these SAME women will typically blow a gasket if their man tells them about spending time with ex girlfriends. guarantee it.

Good story.

I am surprised by the comments. They seem to have difficulty understanding such concepts as fiction and fantasy.

Fun short story. At least he got one more good fuck out of her .

Hopefully, " I wasn't kind " means he ruined the slut's and her paramours lives after he left.

too quick. 3 stars

@Anonymous, we know EXACTLY what happened!

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@Tajfa, it's a 750-word story, "short" is pretty much by definition.

General hate the 750 word thingy and this is exactly why.

Even at 750 word limit, it was still tiresome to read this crap.

Not enough of a story. Maybe a PI with some hard proof.

The only reason I like it was he dumped the cheating bitch.

You have a good idea--now develop it! Tease the reader just a bit--throw in a little drama--show us the husband as he goes about catching her or squeezing the confession out of her. Even a wife as dumb as you write this one is very unlikely to confess as easily as your character. You make husband come across as a a guy who'd just sit there sipping on a cup of coffee while wife tells all.

On the plus side, you had me hooked for the first few paragraphs. Would love to see it reworked. cd

So he gets her talking and she lets it slip that she was actually fucking these guys and sometimes more tan one at a time, but he still sticks his dick into that swamp for one last great fuck. Sure hope she didn’t pass on any reminders like HIV.

I love writers who can get a point across with an “economy” of words. It’s highly likely that he actually unleashed the gates of Hell on her, but simply says, “I wasn’t kind.”

That was down right fucking stupid on every level.

Really, it was fucking dumb. She was dumb, he was dumb, the plot was dumb, evidently you think the reading public is pretty dumb too.

Not clever or cute. Did you get bored? This was a mere outline, NOT a story.

A pleasant story about a silly cheating wife that accidentally confesses her cheating. LOL reminded me of my 2nd wife giving me my last fuck ever as we were breaking up. I couldn't stop myself from coming it was the last time ever she said. Until she got married to her big dicked lover and came to see me on the side. By that time I brought my buddies along as well. Didn't hurt her pussy not did wonders for my ego after she left me for him and still came to fuck me. LOL plus her got stuck with spousal support after their divorce! While I still banged her, and my buddies also. LOL good times 5 stars

Good story for 751 words. 4 stars.

Good short story. Maybe you could add a second part. Not sure how to make it work. Maybe she misses his big paycheck and loses her big house and nice car, all the benefits of the fat paycheck. Maybe he returns and becomes a movie producer with her as the "real pornstar housewife", then he takes all the money and leaves her ass and moves to Mexico! Stupid....yea I guess, like most of the shit on this site!

She got carried away, and fess'd-up. LP

As usual, I enjoyed the humor in this story. (1) But this is still too much a BTB story for my personal tastes. I found Doug's sudden departure at the end unsatisfactory--as a plot element, to say nothing of real-world ethics. (2) On the other hand, I suspect that Fran didn't get punished enough to satisfy the rabid advocates of Traditional Morality that have set up a large and noisy encampment in Loving Wives. (Though their response has been surprisingly low key in the 29 comments I read before writing this one.}

JB, your many stories traduce and make comic fun of almost all the shibboleths of conventional morality. I'd love to see you stop honoring--and start undermining--the tenet that Adulteresses Must Be Punished For Their Sins.

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Note to readers: 8 years in graduate school is a reasonable time, assuming that Fran was pursuing both a Master's and a Ph.D., and assuming that--for at least much of that time--she had been awarded a graduate teaching assistantship or else held some other part-time job.

Last sentence made it palatable at least, and it was funny. Sort of.

Doug’s morals likely caused him to over react. Fran obviously needed to come clean sooner than later in their marriage and relationship if she wanted to be a “slut” at those conferences. Yes, the word limit choked the development of the story. A epilogue story or more background could tie it all together. Thank You!

I loved the rawness, the "sad" ending and the sharpness of her words

I'm in favor of swinging and spouse sharing stories. But the demeaning way she treated her husband makes the ending well deserved. What took him so long? He should have invited a few friends over for the finale.

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Shit story

Ah the problem with lying is you have to keep track of what your lie is.

Nice short little stroke story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talent.

She fell for that way to easy.

Story is so-so. Wife is a slut, husband is brainless. Now that he has names, time for a Louisville slugger.

Nice story - well written.

Very good story - enjoyed the developments