by JesterHaT
. . .but I don't look for errors in words, etc. Yet, you had more than a fair share of mistakes in your nice short story, therefore, I gave you four stars.
This story is so fucking bad. Did you write it when u were sleeping or something ?
Please!!!! Someone fuck my virgin pussy!!! I'm dieing to lose my stupid virginity and feel cum paint the walls of my womb!!!!! Ugh! I'm so horny!!!!
I was jerking off as i read this. not many stories can make me cum. You have my applause. excelent.
awesome story i even got an image going on in my head when she started riding him....keep up the good work!
it was a wonderful story, i see you have lots of taent. i wish you much luck on your future stories, thank you so much for sharing.
Love the story, but come on,,, a football player at the biggest party of the year and no condom..and he planned it? Otherwise terrific story.
I often wondered what cheerleaders REALLY did ,now I know.The idea is catching on fast in UK,Iam pleased to say.A happy fun tale,loved it.
A cheerful tale which the world could do with far more of at the moment.