All Comments on 'A Christian Wife's Duty'

I've read about a half of it.

Hope you don't get bombed by '1' votes.

LOL

this stinks!!!!1

I am not sure what to think of this story. Part of me thinks this is a cry for help and that this person is really experiencing this and needs help and an outlet for her emotions. Part of me thinks this is writen as a "story" for the site and if that is the case it is both good and bad because it comes across as real. If the author was trying to be thought provoking, kudos!

This did not have the feel of a fantasy. I hope it is, otherwise it is horribly scary.

As someone else commented,I also hope this is just make beleive,otherwise you need to get the hell out of their and those two need to be castrated.

I too, got the feeling that this was real. I do hope not and if not, the author did an excellent job. It seemed to be written by somebody who didn't have a lot of time or education, true to the words of the narrator. The narrator also seemed very depressed, again, true to her words. I do have a hard time believing it to be real however, because if she only gets 2 hours a month, how did she find literotica to submit her story to? I think my first destination would be an abuse website. Also, I would prefer a little less on the grammatical errors.

Hello,

If this were real don't you think the author would have used the free time to contact the authorities?

Wake up. It's only a story. Sheesh.

that wasnt a sex story or a fantasy wheres the cum, wheres the orgasms?

god i hope this is not really happenening as other say it seems awful real. when i look at it from that point i hope you find a way out is what i pray for.

Loved the story but needs more detail!!! It made me feel bad for the woman because no one deserves to be treated that way UNLESS they wish it. I'm printing this one up and I'm gonna make my hubby read it over and over again. Maybe some ideas will 'pop up' and I'll be one HAPPY CAMPER!! thanks :)

I agree with some of the other comment i hope that this is not real. this is a weird story even for nonconsent. thier is nothing all that erotic about the story. It is seem like a cry for help. are you okay

I love non-consent for the detail. It feels like you have the basis for a good story but have no idea how to make it work. You need detail. All I can say is read some of the other stories to get the idea.

As a work of fiction this isn't even a story worth writting. As fact it is a sign that this wife is clearly NOT thinking. If this is what being a Christian means then I'd say 99.99% of women will seriously rethink that religion!

Great story! Lots of fun!

if this is real then those men are freaks and need to be taken care of, if its not real then the writer definatly has issues.

I'm so sick of people coming into the "Non-concential" stories section and then complaining that the stories they're going out of their way to read are either digusting or insulting to them.

DON'T READ WHAT YOU WILL GET OFFENDED BY.

DON'T READ WHAT YOU THINK IS DIGUSTING.

Its fucking simple. I liked your story, it was interesting and it was hot. Keep writing things like this, don't let other peoples bad reviews bother you. If it's one thing i've learned on this website,its that half of these readers don't have much of a life anyway.

this story is classic non-consent in the degree of humilation and submission. It holds you on the edge of hunger and disgust. I suspect the author has secrets....

A Christian woman should submit to her husband. A Mormon would say that sodomy is fine as long it is by the husband. Baptist sects often leave their women in skirts and uneducated. He is not following the Bible law if he lets' his son or his friend take his wife. Leviticus 18 verse 8 prohibits sex between a step son and his fathers wife. She should read her bible and talk to her pastor unless her husband is the pastor.

the concept was quite brilliant and stimulating, but you really dropped the ball, writing-wise. You didn't describe anything. I've heard sexier descriptions on Law & Order (the one with the rape victims, idk)

It could have been really sick and twisted and awesome with some dialogue, and with an actual description of the sex. But, it did have some nice tension, with the sex-and-religion theme. Oh, the hypocrisy of any religion that defines sex as immoral! And the secrecy and shame that comes hand in hand with such a religion!

try harder next time.

Several people have commented "is this real or fiction"? I'd like a simple answer to that question. If it's fiction, then it is well enough written to be believeable. If it is real, you need to get out of there! Let us know please.

S.

I loved this story. I so envy her. I would love to be in her position. I can't think of anything that would be more pleasureable than to be the wife of a man that forced me into sex with other men and into sex that I think I didn't want to participate in. I am merely a woman, how can I know what I want sexually. A man is so much smarter and knows exactly what I need. Let him show me how to be happy.

Although we are having a great time at sex, G-d at the same time is ever present.

I am not a christian nevertheless, Bible is a Holy book, accordingly, it won't be proper to exploit it to serve such petty purposes as sexual literature.

Sounds like the Christian cult in Bountiful, BC

I hope you've written more like this, I love stories in which the woman is completely enslaved and must obey her husband/owner. I especially enjoyed (and this was a surprise to me) that the woman wasn't especially clever, and simply told what happened.

the written words are great but it worries me it maybe true. If it is it is just another example why religion should be banned. I'm an atheist but each to his own BUT believe in god or no why just we dont work on just doing the right thing by people.

I sincerely hope it is not true. But IF it is fiction, then, brava. I would love to read more like this.

I enjoyed the storyline. The wife's poor spelling is the result of her husband keeping her uneducated. The part of the stranger beng brought in upped the HOT quotient a lot! I would like more stories similar to this.

Your depiction of what it means to be a fundamentalist Christian is uneducated, bizzarre and extreme. I do have experience with such churches even though I presently do not belong to one. The bigotry here was too distracting for this story to be titillating.

If she/he had gone into more detail, it would have distracted from the 'real' feel of this story that makes it so hot. Nicely done.

Where is the story?????? Just a bunch of boring sex. Man what a waste.

This was very interesting and entertaining, please post more, but you can skip the prego parts.

Perfect, absolutely perfect. This is what non consent really is and I thank you for such a realistic story.

loved this story. it is a favorite. super hot

please write more!

but he shares his wife with other men? WTF? Isn't that opposite of what the bible teaches? I mean, I could understand multiple wives(the whole mormon thing) and I can understand it if he was forcing his wife to have anal sex...but wife sharing? Where is that in the bible?

Also, if she was 18 when they married...where were the parents? Why was she on the pill? None of this really made any sense and was too distracting to be erotic.

The main Mormon church is nothing like this, true the woman are encouraged to be house wives but it's their choice and they are educated again if they wish to expand their knowledge they can but as for multiple wives that has not been allowed in the Mormon church for probably 100 years or so the only Mormons who do allow it are ones who are away from the main Mormon church and teachings therefore a cult and not truley part of the Mormon religion

The biggest problem with this story is that it's not long enough. I'd love to read more.

I wish the story was longer. Please write another chapter!!

Should leave the word Christian out of it, even if the story is a fantasy. It's more like a cult. Anything that goes against what Christianity is all about, is not Christian. Just because someone calls themselves a Christian doesn't mean that they are one. A real Christian man would love and respect his wife, both submitting to each other with gentleness and with respect.

I definitely agree that the Christian thing shouldve been left out..why u bringing religion into it. Totally ruined it.

basically takes christian veiws to another level but doesnt change them. I'm so happy to be atheist

It's not wrong for you to stand up and stop this! In fact the Lord wants you to. You need to contact the law and report your husband, step son, and stranger from the church. They RAPED you and that is sin and against the law! 🙏

It is your duty to obey your husband and if that means taking 1000 strangers then that is your sole purpose. Your husband is being patient with you. I would have beat you with my leather strap. My wife and daughters do exactly what their told. My daughters 18th birthday I took her virginity in her pussy and asshole. I've let many of others have her and my wife. My wife is now to bring me her sister and submit to her while her sister is pleasuring me and everyone else I want to sexually use her. Then I will sell her to the highest bidder. Be a good whore for your husband and his son

If he's so "Christian," why was she on the pill during their dating and why did he penetrate and fuck her so often before they married?

You keep being a good wife. Remember you are 3 holes a pair of tits and 2hands to do as your husband tells you. I do encourage you to write more.

I liked it but it needs more detail and be a bit longer IMO.

You are a good slut, your family has trained you well.