by sexykitten123
You have to suspend disbelief to think someone would fly a helicopter from Florida to Montana, particularly in part of one day. That's like 12-15 hours of flying with several stops to refuel.
you damn fool, don't you see the hitched a ride with Santa
You have about as much romance in your soul as a rat turd
you for got to mention that the pilot had to be way over his flight hours
on the other hand I hope and pray that you never spend Christmas alone crying
And the real miracle is making that trip, Florida to Montana, in a helicopter, in December, in less than 24 hours. I’m no helicopter pilot but I’ve ridden in my fair share of the things, and a two thousand (or more) mile flight in a typical civilian bird would take probably 20 to 24 hours, at best. And that’s if everything went perfectly. Including the weather. Yeah, that would be a miracle. Actually this was a pretty nice little story, I just couldn’t help but nitpick it a little.
Aside from a Few Minor Spilling Mistakes But Hay No One's Perfect, but Other than that it was Really a Great Story. But I Must Admit at One Point I Thought that it would Turn out to be a Tear Jerker Kind Of Story, but even it didn't Turn out that way it was Still Great as I have Said Many Times Already. I Especially Loved the End.