by CiaoSteve
Fantastic, one of the best ever. I'm looking forward to the continuation, a girl knows exactly what to do to another girl and exactly where to do it too.
Don't get me wrong I loved the story, but the dynamic between the girls was amazing and unfulfilled. I would love to read more of this story between Monica and Amber.
Very well done. I'm a very critical reader and I did not notice any missteps. Thank you for a very enjoyable story.
So Amber managed to turn Monica bisexual by the end of the story,but she also awakened Monica's sexual independance towards her brother Jack.Now I don't know whats in store for Jack,Monica & Amber but I wish it had played out that Jack had enrolled in the College Monica and Amber went to and offered Jack to stay with them.
Then Monica convinces Amber to give straight sex a chance and have Monica's Boyfriend/Brother a try once,and even if Amber hates it atleast she could still be with Monica while Jack watched.But knowing Amber she likely would love straight sex and wants Jack to fuck her too.
But ultimately Jack,Monica,& Amber could stay there in that College Town for good and Jack and Monica could be together from now on away from there Parents mostly.
The story was believable and the characters realistic. Not a fan of the obtuse joking both females used but that is a personal preference. Overall, well written with very hot descriptions. 4.5 stars