All Comments on 'A Clean Break'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Loved it

I love the woman "fucking over the guy" aspect to this story. The fact that he tought the money was going right back into the account was the perfect touch. Excellent job.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
HOT HOT HOT!!!

I think this is great... but seriously... how did she go from being so weak and damaged to so strong? I, too, loved the idea that she totally fucked him over, but why didn't he come looking for her? That one part, I didn't understand. I mean, even if he didn't come looking for her... $700 is a lot of money.

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