All Comments on 'A Clear Afternoon in the Early Morn'

by petitelove

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Bridget69Bridget69over 19 years ago
Outstanding!

Great fantasy told in vivid, sensual detail. Loved it!

petitelovepetiteloveover 19 years agoAuthor
Thank you

I am soo glad you like it. Thanx for reading it, I really appreciate it.

xoxoxo

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Very nice. I am hooked and want to read more...

I'd love to read more of your stories. The only thing this one needs is more build-up to a slightly more passionate ending. I got me very warm and slightly fuzzy :)

swjunckie

VandrenVandrenabout 19 years ago
Excellent!

Excellent piece, Petite! Wonderful, simply wonderful. :)

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