All Comments on 'A Clear View'

I definitely like the setup here. This one could be great fun. One fox in a henhouse full of horny women? Oh, yeah!

Great as usual, can't wait of part two!!

Judy really was a nut job in college, Bryan should have listened to his room mate or at least left when she involved Carol, or even the last red flag should have been Bob. She fucked him because she was bored and Bryan just let that go? Really?

Thanks for taking the time to introduce people and develop characters so that names could be connected with people.

too much back tracking

hopefully the rest of other wise enjoyable story will rate a 5

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I enjoy the depth and complexity in this set up.

It also makes me long for college days with friends like this! I was part of a group of close-knit friends, but very straight and inhibited.

I like the portrayed reality of marriage and relationship: close and familiar and bored and with challenges and frustrations. Looking forward to more fun in the next chapter.

I quit after the first five paragraphs.

I appreciate craftsmanship in a story. Please keep writing.