All Comments on 'A Clockwork Green Ch. 10'

The escape was action packed to say the least. I especially love how you interweave humor in the darkest of situations (like the bit about his specially prepared but ultimately unused "last line" for Mackenzie).

The quality of the writing is spectacular and the action is impressive. Keep at it!

loving it... pls keep it up..:))

...Doc, cause Cherry's something very special in this amazing world you've concocted and no matter how hard I wander back through everything, tear it apart and look for a clue... I come up empty. Somehow she was a cabin boy, and she was found on board a ship... SHE was the treasure... anyway that's my best for now. Helluva story Doc, and what ever you take to see these visions? Prob-ly best to keep it to yourself, as it would burn all of our brains to cinders no doubt, lol! Please just keep it comin' as it makes my boring days recovering in this hospital all worthwhile. Cheers! --- Josie

Kidney stones. Fuck me running.

I put off reading this as long as I could because I knew I would be utterly frustrated if I couldn't read the series in its entirety. Fuck me if that wasn't a self-fulfilling prophecy. I know you said this was a collaborative effort Doc, and I'm curious to know who's perspective you're writing from? Or are you two sharing that as well? My gut feeling says you're voicing Mack. Either way keep 'em coming man! I"m totally eager now for the buildup to meeting 'Him'. Hope you're feeling better soon!

I wrote the Mack chapters. Ap wrote the Charlotte chapters. I did most of the editing and story supervising to keep things coherent.

Some of the chapters in this story have been receiving abnormally high views. Literotica is currently unable to share referrer data with me, so I don't know where this traffic is coming from.

If you happen to be a reader reading this from a link or a recommendation, I'd love to know where that came from.