All Comments on 'A Colleague's Wife'

Wonderful. Wish I could vote twice. I'd give this a ten.

Thank you for your comment, Mr. Anonymous. You made my day! JB

Got me “up” & enjoyed the heck out of it.

Thanks for sharing.

Bob

Loved it

Absolutely positively a fantastic story. Kept my attention the whole way, which is rare for some of the longer stuff here. My one suggestion would be that you kind of have 2 sections at the beginning where you give the character backgrounds which felt slightly disjointed.

Other than that, I agree with the 10 star comment.

well written. Only thing I didn't care for was the twist re: who J Blaine really was. I think the story would have been better without that diversion. Thanks for writing, will check out your other stories.

..........your slimy hotel of choice, and I stopped reading.

Dear Anonymous,

I understand. I'm sorry you missed the end of the story. What can I say? People are complicated, even in fictional stories. Thanks for reading as far as you did. For the other people who have commented, thank you all. I am thrilled you enjoyed the story!

JB

not once had a erotic story bring me to tears till today. well done

Brilliant

Well done, thanks.

Outstanding. Great concept. Great dialog.

Thanks sooo much for such wonderfully written work..made me go crazzyy wet and also connected with me at a deeper level too. Exhibitionism comes in all forms and shapes and this one was just..mind blowing. LOved the small little details of clothing and underclothing too. LOved also the way u were messing with the readers minds :-).

Thanks so much !

JB, you know how to write a story that makes a man hard and erect. It worked on me. I see you as Ann, but I suspect you're really Martha. Whatever. Great sexy story. Five stars. Wish I could give it more.

Best ! Excellently written

Beautifully written. Well done but somehow I missed why Anne and Murry were together and chaste. Why was she still a virgin??

I have just recently discovered your work on here. Didn't know what I was missing. I have a lot of reading ahead of me. I really liked this one.

Another great story. Slowly working through them 5*.

This story was confusing

Very interesting story. The making of an exhibitionist. It's good to see a woman who's so passionate about her craft. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

Another lovely sexy story.

You certainly have a way with words.

5stars

Anna

A very nice story, and everyone gets the right partner in the end, like in an Anthony Trollope novel.