by BigGL
Loved both ur stories hope to see more from u. couple things... id recommend getting an editor as there were quite a few grammatical errors. Also id like to see black widow or Harley Quinn. Hope u dont think I was harsh I really love ur work keep it up :)
The story is really good but PLEASE edit it for spelling, grammar, and lay off of the page-long run-on sentences.
Keep up the good work, it's great! Nice length, as per another comment do get an editer, makes reading easier...
As for who next... how about Luna from Harry Potter while she still has white hair, also I'd love to hear him go down on her...
Thanks