All Comments on 'A Comic Con to Remember'

by BigGL

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PhoenixPhoenixalmost 11 years ago

There gotta be a part 2

CyalithCyalithalmost 11 years ago
Love the Concept

But it needs some proofreading, and I think you could add more depth and tension to the story. I love the appreciation for BBw nerds though.

thelastniceguythelastniceguyover 10 years ago
love it

Loved this so much part 2 please

BigGLBigGLabout 10 years agoAuthor
Part 2 is up.

Part 2 is up. Please give some more feedback.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

It happened really fast. I think a little more talk before running to a side room would have made more sense. Still a good story and an additional chapter(s) would be great

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