All Comments on 'A Complete Education'

Looking forward very much to seeing where you go with this.

this was a great beginning. hope to read more soon.

hope the story leads to some light bi action between guys, for marys pleasure...

I loved it! It's ripe with details and anticipation. please post more soon.

Hope Mary leads the boys into some bi contact.

Great, well written buildup in sexual tension between Mary and Jimmy. I will be waiting with great anticipation to read the subsequent chapters describing Mary's explorations down all the paths of erotic sex with others as well as herself ! Well done and thank you for writing!

Very well written, and highly appealing scenarios ;) Whichever way this goes, I'll look forward to reading more!

Very erotic story so far. Hope you keep it going. The sexual tension buildup gave me me a very nice hardon while reading.

I loved it and I hope you continue. Thank you for writing and sharing it.

great story--bring more

love the story so far, makes me wish i would have gone to school longer.

Enjoyed it very much. You write very well--I could certainly envision everything that happened. Certainly wish it would have happened to me in my college days!

I would have voted 5+

This made us hard and wet respectively. Loved it. We had an amazing fuck after reading it. Cant wait for the next chapter.

Do us a favour and have a peek at our first effort. A comment from you would be appreciated.

Regards.

Love the story so far. Can't wait for the next chapter!

There are numerous elements in the story on which to build and expand.

The three boys/the four girls / various art students, models,as well as Instructors.

The field is wide open. You can raise the temp. And the stakes with each encounter. After all,it is called "A Complete Education"!

More please.....

Another great story from one of my favorite writers on Literotica. I love that there was no penetration in this story, but I'm still satisfied. The erotic tension between Mary and Jimmy was great.

As a former English major - and current writer - whose female college roommate was an ultimate temptation, this one really speaks to me. Sort of feels like what might have happened had I had a little less self-control. Great work.

I really enjoyed this. However, I felt that this was a little more fast past than your usual stories and that the characters actions were a little too forward.

Overall, i still love this plot line and im glad to see your still writing stories. I hope you continue this story. Im looking forward to part two.

great stuff mate. keep up the good work.

I really enjoyed this submission, I have never read your other work but I will be! I loved the story, please release a part two! Great work!

Really draws you into the story & characters. Exhibitionism just the way I am; can totally relate! I may have to explore "more of the possibilities" as well. Waiting anxiously for the next chapters! Thank you for your stories!! :)

My fav story of yours is definitely "roommates or more" but I loved this one as well. I adored how Mary was so foreward... She reminded me a lot of myself. I love telling a man exactly how I feel and what I want. It was fun having this played out. The one suggestion I'll make is to have someone edit the spelling and grammar mistakes in your stories. As an English buff like Jimmy, it's a big pet peeve of mine and slows down the enjoyment of the story for me. I'll privately email you with my email if you'd like some help. Thanks again! Miss M

I have a fantasy somewhat similar to this.

Fantastic story!!

Well written. More please.

loved the story keep it coming

Sex ed at its finest!'

Love this story, please continue.

I loved it so much I even joined in the fun!

I really enjoyed the mix of sex and the potential of what's to come. I hope you'll continue.

In college, in a private room with someone who is recently attached to someone who is elsewhere for a few days, and yet willing to draw lines and establish unspoken trust-related boundaries. This reflects uncommon maturity that seems inconsistent with later behavior. It is commendable to hold this up as an example, but I wonder whether it is credible.

This was as hot as a story can get. Looking forward to more of their adventures.

You have a wicked imagination - barely legal! Can't wait for the next instalment.

I loved your writing and would like to read more.

Well I want to read more about jimmy, mary, Pete, Kelsey and maybe even Anna.

I'd like to see how Pete and Jimmy get in touch with eachother, maybe to pose for Mary's drawing sessions, and whatever may come after that :)

This is a very interesting storyline.It will be interesting to see how it develops!

Strong writing skills..

Being a nerd myself I can relate to the plight of poor Pete. He is a nerd who finally has a girlfriend that he is “totally bonkers” over and wants to be exclusive with. She, however, starts having sexual relationships behind his back with his supposedly best friend who is a hot jock guy. Story of a nerds life!

Really liked it. Felt like it was written by an intelligent person. Maybe because of the college kids. Was hot but still teasing. Interesting and still sexy.

awesome so ar. typical male hang ups, wouldn't even lick a massive tit and nipple because it had cum on it, even though it was is own. What a wuss

Good premise.

But sex is too straightforward. Moves ahead too fast. Lacks details. Lacks dialog about what each is feeling while masturbating. Lacks her suggesting to him how he should masturbate. Faster? Slower? Just cock? Balls? And lacks him suggesting to her what he'd like to see her do.

Three stars.

Sorry orie, this one is a disappointment to me after reading a couple of your stories. So far it is not a story. I cannot get into it so I will move to your next submission....JZK

Even better the 2nd time through it! Brings back sexy memories from my college days!

Another wonderful, exciting tale! There are some pronoun errors here and there, but not enough to really detract from the story. Thanks for sharing your talents with us.

Your stories are awesome. Discovered Clear View by chance but will now read all of them. Very sexy and has my cock doing jumping jacks.