All Comments on 'A Complete Surprise'

by Debbie

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msboy8msboy8over 20 years ago
Good story

Gret story, I loved the fact that one of her attackers was a woman. Write more please...

hiddenselfhiddenselfover 20 years ago
A little too much tell and not enough show

It also stops kinda awkardly.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
So far it's great

But how can you leave us hanging like that? Thats really not nice.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
waste of time

Did your computer break? What happened to the rest of the story? Please either finish the stories in the future or don't waste our time.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
why -.-

again,this is the third story in a row i read and has a HE in it.Its lesbian section for people who want to read about WOMEN only.Not bisexual or anything.this is a big fcking turn off.please post the stories in the right section

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Surprise

Nice build up. Can't wait to read what happens next! I'm certain she gets fucked good and loves it!

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